Could bạn read my story? 5 các điểm thưởng if bạn tell me what bạn think of it!

I tình yêu it!

Wow!!! That was amazing!!!! I loved it!!! bạn did such an awesome job!!!!! ^•^

Hmmm... I guess it's a start. There's some grammar errors here and there, and the part with the note taking kind of confused me. It raised a few các câu hỏi in me, like:

1) Wouldn't the teacher let her write notes hoặc something in class? Lots of teachers do that, and I never heard of a teacher who says bạn must write notes at the end of class.
2) And why is she thinking about how she is not secretive? Is there a point for it? I mean, anyone could've thought to put the paper on their lap. It's common sense.

Yeah, you'll probably think I'm a hater hoặc something, but I'm just giving some constructive criticism.

Wow! I'm interested in this! I really like...no....LOVE this story!! Amazing :-)

Sure, I will read it.