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Can somone help me!!!!!?????????!!!!!! Please??????????

Is this a good prologue?????
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I watched a deer bound through the trees. I was about to turn and leave when I saw somone, hoặc something crouching in the bushes. I walked a bit closer. He looked like an adult but he wasn't much bigger then me. He had long blond hair and bright big blue eyes. Then I saw something odd. His ears were pointed. And they weren't just slightly pointed. Like an elf's. I stepped closer and he darted away through the trees. 
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Well, it's got an elf in it, so AWESOME!!!!
Sylvia_Puffin posted hơn một năm qua
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Weasel1999 said:
I take it this is just the start of the prologue? If so it's good. Could bạn read my story and tell me what bạn think? Thnx
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 I take it this is just the start of the prologue? If so it's good. Could bạn read my story and tell me what bạn think? Thnx
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Weasel1999 posted hơn một năm qua
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It's good, too! I read it. :D
Sylvia_Puffin posted hơn một năm qua
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Yea I'll read it!
misscrazel posted hơn một năm qua
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thnx :)
Weasel1999 posted hơn một năm qua
MovieManiac95 said:
Yeah I like it :) I won't be a grammar nazi hoặc any such thing.
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Thanks!
misscrazel posted hơn một năm qua
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I think to further assist, we need a bit more. When bạn add more, it'll be easier to see if where it's headed is a good idea.
MovieManiac95 posted hơn một năm qua
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Ok. I'll try 2 add more.
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Sylvia_Puffin said:
It's good, sis. Though how come the elf looks exactly like Legolas? :D
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Because that's how I imagine elves.
misscrazel posted hơn một năm qua
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Oh. Okay. :)
Sylvia_Puffin posted hơn một năm qua
boytoy_84 said:
I think it sounds interesting. :)
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Thanks!
misscrazel posted hơn một năm qua
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You're welcome. :)
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tinkerbell66799 said:
I've got 3 words for ya.
THAT.
WAS.
AWESOME!!!!!!!!
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Thanks!!!:D
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