i just wrote the first chapter of my magical life can yu plz read it and tell me what bạn think i promise you'll like t=it and plz dont be harsh thnx

...Lol.

Problem 1: You're asking for my honest opinion, and yet bạn say "plz dont be harsh", which leads me to believe that bạn are only asking for praise. 98% of the time that is the case with bạn kind of people.

Problem 2: "You kind of people" being the grammar fails. I'm incredibly hesitant to read any piece of nghề viết văn bởi bạn because I'm doubtful that I'll actually be able to read it. (I can't stand txt tlk.)

Problem 3: "My Magical Life." No, does not capture my interest even slightly. It sounds like just another boring teenage novel written bởi a naive daydreamer. Not that there's anything wrong with the latter, just the former.

Have a nice day:)