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The ocean

He gives me a smile,
he allows me to fly.
I’m flying like a bird,
free and placid.
He gives me a strength,
i give him my mind.
My tim, trái tim is full of his thoughts,
full of his brightness,
full of his silence.
But still,he’s like the ocean,
so deep and mysterious,
bạn can not find his soul
unless it finds you.
And i’m so Công chúa tóc xù and such a coward
the same time,
i need him thêm and more,
and i’m scared,
oh i’m scared for he found my soul.
Don’t blind your eyes not to see,
don’t trap your mind not to feel.
Oh, i wish to touch his hair gently,
oh, i wish to calm in his embrace.
I want him to see it in my eyes,
to feel that my tình yêu
will never betray him,
and i want him to be what he is already,
himself.

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 irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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CB4evaGiggles said:
haha, wow, i think its really good!
=D
great job!
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Thank you. :)
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torriebee said:
wow thats soo good~ bạn could have a cool slide hiển thị while đọc this haha
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LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại Thanks sweetie. ♥
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Lovetreehill said:
Great one ! I tình yêu it !
You're a good writer Irena, never give up ;)
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Thank bạn honey. I won't! :*
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I hope that :)
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♥ ♥ ♥
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Spi_Kat_Penguin said:
I ♥ It, ...wow....I cant describe my feelings as im reading...Its very good...

-Spi
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Thank bạn so much. ♥
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RavenRox2 said:
that's amazing!! I tình yêu it!! <333
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~ Thank you. ~
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your welcome!! :]]
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sugarsweet076 said:
i tình yêu it!!! great job!!!
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:) Thanks. :)
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clanbillr said:
I'm not much of a poet but I like it!! It makes me think how very calm, but with a small ripple and then ruthless the ocean can be!!
Thank bạn for the poem!!!
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 I'm not much of a poet but I like it!! It makes me think how very calm, but with a small ripple and then ruthless the ocean can be!! Thank bạn for the poem!!!
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Aw thank you. :)
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Oh yes, the ocean can be calm and ruthless the same time,mysterious.
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Sure. I will. :)
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MrOrange16 said:
Its so beautiful! *sniff*
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Thank you. ;)
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heyitssmarsx3 said:
that's an excellent poem, good job!!
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Thank you. ♥
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gossiprincess said:
waw this is an awsum poem!=D
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jem_ said:
i enjoyed đọc it, really raw and lovely :)
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thank you. ♥
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juicyjossy9 said:
Scared to be scarred... I've been there. Like many of us humans. bạn touched me right on the spot. Don't worry, it does not make me sad. To the contrary, it reminds me what makes my tim, trái tim beat, so blindly true and so human to be close to my emotions. Craving to tình yêu and be loved bởi a loved one is ALL THERE IS. Thanks for posting this. bạn make my day. If bạn don't mind, it will now be part of my "Treasures" book. jj9
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Thank bạn so much. ♥ Of course i don't mind,i'm delighted. ♥
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LunaShay said:
Its....beautiful :') if my khẩu hiệu was big enough,i would put this on there!
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LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại thanks. :)
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Pikafan32 said:
Are bạn gonna name all of them 'What do bạn think of this poem?'

No... just kidding

Anyways the real review

It was really good. One of your better works, but not the best. Have bạn ever tried a murder poem, hoặc a happy one. I'm fine with the style bạn have now, but from experience I would have to say that it's easier to write your own genre if bạn try others.

- Re Re
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LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại Yes you're right,it is easier to write your own genre. Well who knows, i might try something new. LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại
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Mallory101 said:
tình yêu it! ♥
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thank you. :)
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gaby124 said:
your poem is so good i can´t find the words to describe it! If ur dream is to be a writer then bạn have a very good chance of being such a wonderful and amazing writer!!! keep on following ur dreams!! : )
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aw thank bạn so much and thanks for the support. ♥
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