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I stared nghề viết văn a fanfic, and i would like bạn guys to read it, its called Stakes and Garlic (i know the names' random, but i'll change it if i think of something better) so cud u guy plese read it? the link is below...

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Book-Freak said:
Seems like a good start. There are a few grammar problems and your character seems a little occ. I mean that most people don't go from happy highs to cold fury at a little bit of teasing.
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