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Can bạn guys tell what do bạn think of it?

Call me wacko,call me " a weird one ",
i don't care,'cause bạn don't see...
bạn don't see the dept of my soul,
so call me what bạn want to...
When the sorrow tear my heart,
i hide my tears,i hide it from you,
'cause that's the way bạn can't see it,
the pain pulling me down and bạn don't feel
me the right way,the way i want...
Still the sorrow screams inside me,
that dark side of me bạn will never see,
bạn will never understand when i hush then
when i should say something,when i smile when i should cry...
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I don't like thi ca but well done!
Mrs-X posted hơn một năm qua
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Thank you. :)
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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orangeturnip said:
a poem that sounds like a scream
a sadness inside ,
a message from your soul
a sad cry
but poems can be from the heart
can also be ...
from a position of empathy of anothers pain
either way i hope bạn can see
the sun is shineing (i wish looks likes its gonna storm)
any way i didn't want to write a short answer
i wanted to express that i loved it
but in doing so i
waffled and draged out my responce un neccercererly long and Mất tích my sence of spelling with the pain of brain freezing numbness

any hoos

this is for bạn
♥
and dont break it.
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Thanks... I won't....
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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awwwh.
CullenProperty posted hơn một năm qua
life_rehab said:
this is nice. really. i read thi ca quite a lot and i'm a rather harsh critic but i do believe that this is pretty good. i mean, it's not Whitman hoặc Shakespeare hoặc whatever and you'll have to work hard and practise a lot to develop your talent, but this is 'you', bạn know, a little piece of your soul under the mask of words and it is quite beautiful...if bạn polish it a little bit, it will be really good. nice job:)
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Thanks a lot...
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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i hope bạn didn't mind my answer (i'm not sure if your bình luận is sarcastic hoặc not...). really, that's just what i think... nevertheless, i like the poem and it shows great potential but you'll see that if bạn keep writing, you'll definitely evolve, you'll get better with every poem -- again, this doesn't mean that i don't like it cause, well, actually i do. anyway, i also wanted to say that it's nice to see other young people interested in poetry:)
life_rehab posted hơn một năm qua
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life_rehab; this ----> but this is 'you', bạn know, a little piece of your soul under the mask of words ... IS BEAUTIFUL! oh em gee
CullenProperty posted hơn một năm qua
Vixie79 said:
"you will never understand when i hush then"

I tình yêu how bạn did this line, tình yêu the word hush too. ♥♥♥
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:) ♥ thank you.
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại
CB4evaGiggles posted hơn một năm qua
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You're welcome hon ♥
Vixie79 posted hơn một năm qua
CB4evaGiggles said:
wow, i think thats a really good, and about the soul poem, i like it!

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Thank you. ♥
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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your welcome!! ur good!
CB4evaGiggles posted hơn một năm qua
Pikafan32 said:
It's another beautiful accomplishment. Truly a fascinating write.
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aw thank bạn so much. :)
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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:3 Your welcome
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clanbillr said:
Hi "irena83",
Thank bạn for the awesome poem, "Again"!! We all get to wear our disguises because we don't want certain people to see how we're really feeling inside!! But those disguises end becoming walls so we don't get hurt again!! bạn sound like a truly loving and caring lady and someday the right person will come into your life!!! Just be aware that sometimes tình yêu is only there for a short while but it can feel like a lifetime!!!
So your neither wacko hoặc weird, it's just life!!! Your poems are from deep down inside of bạn and keep letting them out!!!
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Hi "irena83", Thank bạn for the awesome poem, "Again"!! We all get to wear our disguises because we don't want certain people to see how we're really feeling inside!! But those disguises end becoming walls so we don't get hurt again!! bạn sound like a truly loving and caring lady and someday the right person will come into your life!!! Just be aware that sometimes tình yêu is only there for a short while but it can feel like a lifetime!!! So your neither wacko hoặc weird, it's just life!!! Your poems are from deep down inside of bạn and keep letting them out!!!
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Yes i agree with you,we all wear our disguises so those one's who can hurt our feelings easily can not see that. We try to cover that,our weakness.
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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Thank bạn and yes they are deep, i can say a cry of my soul.
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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We all have that same weakness inside of us!!!! I know it's your poem but we all cry in our souls!!!
clanbillr posted hơn một năm qua
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Oh yes we do.
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
CullenProperty said:
Pretty. Are bạn nghề viết văn it from past experiences from someone that hurt bạn hoặc just because bạn can?
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Well actually i wrote that from my personal experience. It did happen a long time ago, but i guess i didn't forget.
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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On one hand it's funny that we can't seem to forget those things! But on the other hand it's great that we don't so we don't have to repeat and go through them all over again!!!
clanbillr posted hơn một năm qua
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oh well, thats sadening & pretty cool at the same tim
CullenProperty posted hơn một năm qua
NatyLy said:
I tình yêu it! good job! :)
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:) Thank you. ♥
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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