My poems, what do yoy think?

The Joy of a Mother

bạn start to giggle
As bạn see the baby inside of bạn wiggle
bạn laugh with joy
When bạn have được trao birth to a baby boy
bạn gasped once bạn heard
His voice saying his first word
With happiness bạn wept
At the sight of your son taking his first step
bạn smiled with a proud heart
When he comes back from school with his own work of art
Years and years go by
When it is time to say goodbye
Off to college he goes
Knowing he wont be back until it snows
But do not worry
He will not forget his Mommy
And now with gladness bạn are crying
As bạn hear the wedding bells ringing
Oh how happy it is to be
A grandmother of three!

tình yêu unto Death

At night I stay up

Thinking of bạn until my time is up

When I am gone I wish bạn the best

I tình yêu bạn even if bạn tình yêu me less

Never understood why we were apart

I guess we were never meant to be from the start

As the wind called my name

I was ready to go until bạn came

Kissed my hand and cheek

bạn đã đưa ý kiến "I tình yêu you, and it is bạn whom my tim, trái tim seeks."

The temptation to go was as great as it was to stay

So I must be careful of what I do and say

Whatever i do is my choice

Who knows, we might miss each other's voice

I decide to stay with my love

As the stars tremble above

On my lips I'll keep a kiss

All my life I'll think of this

I can never say goodbye

Even if I die