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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Hello. I wrote this bài viết for people on this club that like nghề viết văn fanfictions, but have the feeling that they don't do good. This bài viết should help bạn out, and it might also encourage others to start nghề viết văn fanfictions, if they haven't done so.

Again, this is for people on this club that feel like they want to do better, hoặc just don't like reading/writing fanfictions in general. If bạn think you're good at writing, hoặc do like reading/writing in general, give me some feedback.

There are many important things to have in a fanfiction.

1. A setting.

This is very important. If bạn don't have a setting in your story, the audience will be confused, and wonder where it takes place. bạn must include where the story takes place, and/or when it takes place.

Often, when I write a fanfiction that takes place today, I don't add when it takes place, but I always write down when it takes place, if it's in the past, such as my Ponies On The Rails articles. bạn can see the month, day, and năm that each episode takes place in.

As I đã đưa ý kiến earlier, it's important to write down where your story takes place. Since this is a My Little ngựa con, ngựa, pony club, bạn can have it take place in any of the towns for this show, such as Ponyville, Canterlot, Manehattan, Fillydelphia, hoặc Vanhoover. bạn can also create your own towns like I have. Here's a danh sách of towns I created for my fanfictions

St. Foalis - St. Louis
San Francisco - San Franciscolt
Norfoal - Norfolk
Chicagoat - Chicago

Other times, I use real city names for my fanfictions, like Cheyenne, Denver, Portland, and the town that I currently live in, Frenchtown.

2. Characters

bạn can't have a story without characters. Well... bạn could, but it would be boring. If bạn can't think of a creative ngựa con, ngựa, pony name for your OC, try and use real names. That's what I've done with most of my OC's. Also, it's important to have a picture of your OC in the fanfiction so that the readers can understand what he/she looks like.

3. The type of story

There are many ways bạn can write a fanfiction. bạn can make a..

Comedy
Drama
Action
Adventure
Creepy mỳ ống, mì ống
Clop fic
Crossover

Comedy is the best type of fanfiction to write if bạn know a lot of good jokes. Keep your readers laughing as they enjoy all of the good humor in what you've written.

Drama is not a good type of fanfiction. From what I've heard, Drama is when bạn have a ordinary activity, filled with anger, shouting, and sometimes, punching someone in the face. hoặc in this case, punching somepony in the face.

Action fanfictions can be very good, as long as bạn don't make it too violent. Entertain everyone đọc your fanfiction bởi adding...

Gunfights
Car chases
Huge explosions behind a ngựa con, ngựa, pony walking away with sunglasses
A fistfight on hàng đầu, đầu trang of a moving train
A fistfight on hàng đầu, đầu trang of a moving plane

This isn't all bạn need to fill your fanfiction with loads of action, but once bạn get started, you'll find thêm ways to add action into your fanfictions.

Adventure fanfictions can be about many things, such as treasure hunts, searches for Mất tích artifacts, hoặc huge ripoffs of the Daring Do sách that cầu vồng Dash loves to read. I haven't written an adventure fanfiction yet, but I plan to start, bởi creating an OC who turns out to be Daring Do's son.

Những truyện rùng rợn kinh dị is for bronies/pegasisters that like nghề viết văn things about ponies being turned into cupcakes, hoặc about Big Macintosh raping the CMC while killing them at the same time. If you're going to write a fanfiction like that, don't do it on this website. That's the last thing we need!

Clopfics are loathed bởi most people on this website. Basically, clop fics are about porn/rule 34. It may be perfect for Rarity, but not for us!

Crossover fanfictions are where bạn make a crossover of My Little Pony, with anything your tim, trái tim desires. Most of my fanfictions are crossovers, mostly of phim chiếu rạp I like to watch.

4. The way to write a fanfiction

There are two ways of nghề viết văn a fanfiction. The correct way, hoặc the wrong way.

The wrong way is this.

"Hello." đã đưa ý kiến Vinyl Scratch

This is like watching a movie in black & white. bạn get your readers bored, just before they finish the first paragraph.

The correct way is this.

Pinkie Pie soon saw Maud.

Pinkie Pie: Guten tag!
Maud: *Looks at Pinkie* Oh... Hey.

It's quicker to write like this, and it's thêm popular. However, bạn can't write like this in real life, unless it's for a play. However, this is the internet. Feel free to write like this, no one will stop you.

5. A plot

bạn must think about what's going to happen in your story. What's the goal? What's the conflict? How does it end? Here's an example from one of my fanfictions I wrote last year

Hedgehog In Ponyville Episode 8

On my deviantart, it's caleed Hedgehog In Ponyville: The Nazis Strike Back

The plot: Twilight Sparkle turns evil, and helps a scientist named Doctor Robotnik capture Princess Celestia. What they don't know is that somepony is disguised as Celestia. Spike, and Luna tell Sean, and Shredder about this, and have them try to rescue Celestia, while destroying the lâu đài she is being held in.

Conflicts: Diamond Tiara, and Silverspoon tham gia them, but are double agents, working for Nazi Forces. cầu vồng Dash joins Sean, and Shredder, but loses to Twilight in a sword fight.
Diamond Tiara, and Silverspoon knock out Shredder, and attempt to escape from Sean. He needs to fight the two fillies on hàng đầu, đầu trang of a cable car.

Ending: A very close friend of Twilight is on the plane that Sean, Shredder, and their team gets on board. He attempts to kill Sean, but realizes that his plan fails, then jumps out of the plane without a parachute.

Now that bạn have seen the example, it shoudn't be difficult to make the plot, conflicts, and ending of your fanfiction.

That's all there is to it when it comes to nghề viết văn a fanfiction. I wish bạn the best of luck on your future fanfictions. Everyone has their own talent, but anyone can write.

The end.
posted by DragonAura15
 Me as a pony, amazed bởi your talent.
Me as a pony, amazed by your talent.
I just want to say, thanks everyone for making this club such an amazing place! And I would also tình yêu to give a shoutout to all of my Những người bạn in the Pokémon and Haron region club!

Acceptance.
I never quite understood how much power this word contained...until now.
I used to go to a middle school that nearly crushed the personality out of me. Everyone was cussing, being inappropriate, pushing others around, and just flat-out being bullies. And on hàng đầu, đầu trang of all that, my BFF and I were growing apart. Everything I could do, she could do better, and as bạn can imagine, I began to grow jealous. Then,...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
The train arrives at Appleloosa, and the Flim Flam brothers get out.

Applejack: *Watching* Ok, let's go. *Exits train*
Braeburn: *Follows*
Flim: *walks into saloon*
Flam: *Walks into saloon*
Dexter: *Walks into saloon*
Applejack: What do bạn suppose they're up to?
Braeburn: I ain't sure. We better get back to my orchard.

So they did, but inside the saloon.

Dexter: *grabs paper, and pen* Alright. What am I writing?
Flim: A letter! We've gone over this 5 times already in the train.
Flam: Here is what we want bạn to write. bạn ready?
Dexter: Ready.
Flam: Dear Applejack. bạn have made us vượt qua, cross for the...
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The last solstice

Chapter 33: The return of a Princess – Part 2


Celestia idled in her sister's office, gazing through the broken window. In front of her lay the Castle's parade ground, filled with the bodies of the fallen. The heat of the battle was gone and now the Princess of the Sun had to face reality once again. All of her suppressed emotions bottled up and a large teardrop ran down on her cheek, following the path of the burnt scars.

“What have I done?” the white alicorn whispered to herself. “Is this what I'm destined for? To cause pain and suffering?”

The unsettling questions...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
When Dexter, and Octavia got to the office of the Flim Flam brothers, they saw it was empty.

Octavia: They must have escaped while we were shooting all those workers.
Dexter: We got to stop them. *runs down hallway*
Octavia: *following*

Outside the factory

Flim: We're almost out of here.
Flam: Which car are we taking?
Flim: Both of ours. bạn drive yours, and I'll drive mine.
Flam: Why not the other way around?
Flim: Ok!

So they both hopped into their cars, and drove away.

Dexter: Quick, let's get in my car! *gets in*
Octavia: *Gets in*
Dexter: *Drives after the flim flam brothers*
Octavia: There's...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
 General Rosemeyer.
General Rosemeyer.
The helicopter passed us, but the pilot didn't see us.

At the castle

Nazis: *watching helicopter*
General Rosemeyer: *flying helicopter*
Nazis: *run out to greet general*
General Rosemeyer: *climbs out of helicopter*
Colonel Kramer: Hello General.
General Rosemeyer: Hi Colonel. I've got some good news.
Colonel Kramer: What is it?
General Rosemeyer: Twilight Sparkle got the changelings to tham gia us.
Colonel Kramer: That's good. How is Canterlot?
General Rosemeyer: Nothing has changed. Do bạn like my machine?
Colonel Kramer: Seems a little dangerous.
General Rosemeyer: Well bạn must try it.
Colonel Kramer:...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Percy flew along the streets of Cheyenne, and suddenly saw Jeff coming out of a pharmacy.

Percy: Jeff!
Jeff: Percy? What are bạn doing? I'm not feeling well.
Percy: I know, but listen. Do bạn know how bạn got sick?
Jeff: My doctor đã đưa ý kiến it was from a filly I accidentally bumped into. She had some kind of virus.
Percy: When was it?
Jeff: Near my house.
Percy: No, when was it?
Jeff: Last night.
Percy: Alright. Time travel away.
Jeff: Uh, Percy? I don't know any time traveling spells.
Percy: Great. Our only hope is Coffee Creme.
Gordon: *stops nearby* hoặc bạn can count on me.
Percy: Gordon? But you're...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
The first Con Mane story to have OC's that aren't mine. Let's begin on a tropical island 8 miles from Hong Kong.

Hattan: *sunbathing* Sneak Peak, can bạn check the main entrance?
S.P: Right away Ms. Scaramanga.
business pony: Are bạn Hattan Scaramanga?
Sneak Peak: No, I'm her assisstant.
business pony: Where is she?
Sneak Peak: Go in that way.
business pony: *enters room* Hattan Scaramanga.
Hattan: Hi. I just realised bạn have your gun, and I don't have mine.
business pony: That's too bad. *shoots gun*
Hattan: *dodges bullet*
S.P: *turns off lights*
business pony: Where are you? hiển thị yourself!...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Sean The Hedgehog presents

Based off the roleplay bởi Applejackrocks1

Hedgehog In Ponyville, and the Grand Galloping Gala

Dedicated to Jade Gordon

I miss her so much :(

It was one of those days in winter where all the water was freezing. I had to stop Discord from one of his crazy schemes.

Discord: *enters building*
Sean: *waits bởi door*
Discord: *pulls switch*
Sean: The building is going into the ground! *hops on roof*

I snuck into what seemed to be Discord's layer. It was underground.

Robotnik: Guten Tag Discord.
Discord: Dr! So good to see bạn again!! How is everything?
Robotnik: Wunderbar, but listen....
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Rarity woke up in her bed, looking at her clock. And noticed she was late to take sweetie belle to the resturaunt. "Oh goodness! I have forgot to take sweetie belle to the resturaunt." Rarity swung out of bed, trotting to her make up room. The soft colored blue magic had occured to rarity's horn. She had lifted up fake eyelashes and straped it to her left eye. "Oh I really should have resisted sweetie belle's begging." Then she lifted up another eyelash, Strapping it to her right eye. Lied beside her, was a eyeshadow box and the eyeshadow brush. "I'm sure sweetie belle won't mind if we're late...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
This is another story with Con Mane in it. Right now he is planting explosives in a russian military base disguised as a bar.

Con Mane: Ok time to head up. *walks into bar*
Scarlet: Everytime it rains it rains pennies from heaven *eyes Con*
Con: *walks up thêm stairs heading in the bathroom*
Russian pony: Hey. I saw bạn enter the explosive room.
Con: Oh did you? *fights russian pony*
Scarlet: What are bạn doing?!
Con: *throws russian into bathtub*
Russian pony: *pulls out gun*
Con: *throws người hâm mộ into tub which electrocutes the russian pony* Shocking. Positively shocking.

Mares and stallions,...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Sean The Hedgehog presents

Dr. Ani (A Con Mane Story)

In case bạn are wondering, ani is korean for no.

Three old blind stallions were walking alongside a đường phố, street to a club. They were all walking with canes making sure they weren't going to hit anything. They kept walking until they saw a ngựa con, ngựa, pony get in a red sports car. Yes, the stallions were old, but they weren't blind. As the ngựa con, ngựa, pony was getting in his sports car the stallions shot him. Then they got in a old hearse, and drove away. "One agent down two to go." the driver said. "Who are we killing next?" the trái cam, màu da cam stallion asked. "Our tiếp theo target...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
 Sean's Canterlot GMO
Sean's Canterlot GMO
It seemed dark in the store, but soon a light appeared. Then it started moving.

Rarity: I'm scared!
Spike: Don't worry, a few sticks of dynamite are there, and it will blow a hole in the door.
Fuse: *stops*
Spike: Wait a minute
Fuse: *sets box on fire*
Rarity: Don't go there!
Spike: For crying out loud I can do it! Why do bạn always act like I don't know anything?!
box: *explodes*
fireworks: *come out of box*
Rarity: *screaming*

Pinkie Pie: *flying upside down*
Fluttershy: If bạn don't stop, I'll end up like Bartholomew!!
Pinkie Pie: At least bạn can sleep!
control: Alright listen. It's important that...
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posted by NocturnalMirage
Wheels of Evil – Part 9


The Sun is still up, but the night approaches quickly. Four dark silhouettes sneak toward the edge of the Everfree Forest. Four stallions. They di chuyển carefully. Veeeery silently. Like if they were hiding from somepony.

“Are bạn sure this is the right way, Caramel?” one ngựa con, ngựa, pony asks quietly.

“Yes, yes…” Bon-Bon told me precisely where is it.” he các câu trả lời and gestures to the two others.

“Clover, Note, di chuyển your flanks! We best be doing this before the Sun goes down!”

“Right behind ya!”

Ssshhh! There!” caramel, kẹo caramel whispers and points to a large, weird object...
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posted by NocturnalMirage
Wheels of evil – Part 1

It’s summer. The night is warm. The soft breeze cuddles the cây branches. The full Moon pours its white light on the land. Crickets chirping. Countless fireflies circling in the air. Everything is calm. The glowing orb reaches its zenith on the obsidian sky. Flickering stars. Elongating shadows. The clock on Town Square shows 2 AM. The quiet sound of streaming water. A đài phun nước in the middle of the square. The regal, life size statue of Celestia observes the town restlessly. Ponyville at night…

The night is warm. Open windows. Billowing curtains. Sighs, snores...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Con, and his Những người bạn found out that Mr. Sanchez smuggled drugs out of Svoboda into other places in the world, and the way he did it, was illegal.

Sanchez: *drives past S*
S: Rain, do bạn copy?
Rain: I copy. What's the skinny?
S: Sanchez is in a convoy with two sedans, and a bus.
Rain: An actual bus?!
S: No, just a Vriendscoupe bus.
Rain: Oh, thank god.
Con: She's not used to cars. Just flying.
S: I'll keep that in mind.
Rain: *flies above cars*
Con: Why are bạn carrying me again?
Rain: So we can go over the plan. We'll be disguised as tourists, and then we infiltrate Sanchez's plan.
Con: Great.
Rain:...
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 The battle that started it all
The battle that started it all
Before I start this story, let me go over some stuff that happened in the trước đó stories.

November 23, 2012

I arrived at Ponyville, and met the six main characters of MLP FIM. The tiếp theo ngày was the beginning of the Equestria War. A tháng later Canterlot got bombed, and the ngựa con, ngựa, pony Alliance was formed to fight against Robotnik's army.

December 24, 2012

Before his death Dr. Robotnik got Discord, and Blaze the cat to take over his army. Discord would take Ponyville, and Manehattan while Blaze would take Fillydelphia, Stalliongrad, and San Franciscolt.

December 30, 2014

The ngựa con, ngựa, pony Alliance finishes...
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Pinkie took Twilight back to the place she was supposed to rob.

Pinkie Pie: Follow my lead, and don't screw up this time.
Twilight: I got it man!
Pinkie Pie: *walks into store*
Las Pegasus ponies: HEY! Shoot her!
Pinkie Pie: *kills L.P ponies*
Twilight: Wow.
Pinkie Pie: *bounces happily to cashier* Hi!
cashier: *shouts* What did bạn kill those ponies for?
Pinkie Pie: They were going to kill me. bạn also might've died. That's why I came here to offer bạn protection.
cashier: If bạn put it that way, I accept. *pays money*
Twilight: Is that it?
Pinkie Pie: Sometimes. There are places that have illegal...
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 Mike
Mike
When Scootaloo heard General Sky Night say this, she backed away from cầu vồng Dash immediately. "Don't bạn walk away from your big sister!!!" Dash shouted at the little trái cam, màu da cam filly. "You stay away from Scootaloo!" A voice yelled as it came closer Sky Night recognized the Pegasi that flew down a few feet from RD. "mike?" Night asked. "Yes Sky it's me" he đã đưa ý kiến as Scootaloo got behind him. "Rainbow, bạn aren't well" Mike đã đưa ý kiến to the cyan Pegasus. "I remember you!" The cầu vồng ngựa con, ngựa, pony angrily replied. While these two were arguing Pin Tail grabbed his pistol and Green Flame revealed a flint-lock Musket.....
 "Don't walk away from your big sister!!!"
"Don't walk away from your big sister!!!"
posted by Seanthehedgehog
Welcome to another story about a spy named Con Mane. We begin at a Mexican nuclear base.

Con: *runs onto dam*
pilot: *flies past Con*
Con: *ties himself to guardrail*

Con jumped, as the rope slowly let him down toward part of the base. A few phút later he was inside.

Mexican pony777: *watches T.V.*
Mexican pony484: *goes to bathroon*
Mexican pony556: *leaves bathroom*
Mexican pony484: *reads newspaper*
Con: Beg your pardon. Forgot to knock *K.O's mexican*

From there Con walked into an unlit room when he ran into another ngựa con, ngựa, pony named John.

John: ¡Señor! ¿Estás solo?
Con: Yes, I'm alone.
John: You're...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
 Frank
Frank
Con woke up to find himself in a warehouse. He was tied to a chair, and Der cheif was with 15 of his goons.

Con: What do bạn want?
Der Cheif: The money bạn lấy trộm, đánh cắp from me!
Con: It's not stealing if bạn win the money.
Goon 5: *hits Con*
Der Cheif: Ok listen. We can't get the money out of your car, so bạn gotta use your unicorn magic to fix the car, and get the money out for us.
Con: Sure.
Der Cheif: Bring the car in!
Goon 12: *backs tow truck up with Con's car behind it*
Der Cheif: Such a shame that we had to destroy a luxorious car. Then again, no one makes another person crash a Coltillac into a...
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