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elizasmomma posted on Oct 07, 2012 at 09:26PM
"Renouncing Chaos"

This renouncing chaos
is going so fast that i
can't get past this ever
divided beauty that
leaves longing for
some-thing new to
come a-long for me,

But this logical emotion
that is forever wrapped
up inside of me, it comes
so unbound that no-one
has ever found their
way around this renouncing
chaos but me and only me.

This renouncing chaos
goes way-beyond any-
thing we couldv'e ever
imagined it would be.

There is a mystery
that some-how controls
every-thing that this
world holds this ever
longing foundation of the
chaos that we see coming
our way now.

Now that i've now released
the public spectrum that will
soon compose every-unknown
boundary that is now and
forever hidding in this private
turmoil that lives inside and
within us.

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hơn một năm qua KittyKat0008 said…
Wow you are great at writing poems. I love it!!!!! Favorited it :)
hơn một năm qua elizasmomma said…
thnx for what you said a bout my poem it makes me wanna write more poems for you and only you to read, add me as a fan will you please?