This is just a trailer of my new story coming up...
Well, obviously, this isn't the first chapter, but I'm wanting your opinion on a few of things.
-Title
-Characters
-Etc
So, anyway, if bạn want your character in it, comment.
So, let's get on with it.
[10 Years ago]
"Son, take this with you."
I looked up at my father with tears in my eyes. I was only a few years of age, and I hadn't learned much. I was on training to becoming an Invader, but I had no interest in it. It seemed pointless to become one. I thought as soon as bạn became one, bạn were sent on a lethal mission to your own death, so I slacked off during class and only payed attention when my father talked. He talked of many things, like the planets he conquered, and something called Conspirators of the Dawn. I had no idea what they were, but I knew they were against my father and his work, but from my what my father told me, it was a myth. I learned that ngày that it wasn't.
I grabbed my fathers golden bottlecap, wondering what it was, and why my father wanted me to have it. I had only known my father for a short time, and I begged any God out there to save my father from whoever was against us, but as hard as I prayed, nothing happened to him. His lifeless corpse was in my hands.
I knew that ngày that it was my job to find them... Through all the explosions, and souless bodys crying for help, a voice wrang through my head.
It was screeching in a tone that I couldn't understand, but I could make out two words, Marcario Delva...
(Well, that's the trailer, thanks for reading. POST A COMMENT! :3 )
Well, obviously, this isn't the first chapter, but I'm wanting your opinion on a few of things.
-Title
-Characters
-Etc
So, anyway, if bạn want your character in it, comment.
So, let's get on with it.
[10 Years ago]
"Son, take this with you."
I looked up at my father with tears in my eyes. I was only a few years of age, and I hadn't learned much. I was on training to becoming an Invader, but I had no interest in it. It seemed pointless to become one. I thought as soon as bạn became one, bạn were sent on a lethal mission to your own death, so I slacked off during class and only payed attention when my father talked. He talked of many things, like the planets he conquered, and something called Conspirators of the Dawn. I had no idea what they were, but I knew they were against my father and his work, but from my what my father told me, it was a myth. I learned that ngày that it wasn't.
I grabbed my fathers golden bottlecap, wondering what it was, and why my father wanted me to have it. I had only known my father for a short time, and I begged any God out there to save my father from whoever was against us, but as hard as I prayed, nothing happened to him. His lifeless corpse was in my hands.
I knew that ngày that it was my job to find them... Through all the explosions, and souless bodys crying for help, a voice wrang through my head.
It was screeching in a tone that I couldn't understand, but I could make out two words, Marcario Delva...
(Well, that's the trailer, thanks for reading. POST A COMMENT! :3 )