I'm not going to put the whole thing on here. Instead, in a few days (hardly thêm than four days, as long as I don't forget XP), I'll put a link in the các bình luận below to the fanfiction on Fanfiction.net. Anyway, this won't be much to see; just a look at what might come on here. But I hope bạn enjoy this rather small exerpt.
A một giây Chance
Prologue
During the Fall
Here she was, in the middle of falling into insanity, yet it didn’t even feel like it. She felt like she was only venting out her anger and sorrow of her defeat, entangled in chains connected to the ground with no chance to escape on her own. ngọn lửa, chữa cháy exploded from her mouth as she screamed and fell on her side. Yes, this wasn’t insane at all…
Yet the terrified faces of her two worst enemies stood before her, just watching her. Was it so hard to at least get her out of her restraints? She was a ngọn lửa, chữa cháy Lord; she shouldn’t be beaten like this! It wasn’t fair!
Tears splattered from her face as she fell into hysterical crying. The recognition hit. She had lost. She was not ngọn lửa, chữa cháy Lord, nor would she ever be. She had failed-failed her father, failed her nation, failed herself.
Finally, her brother and the Water Tribe girl left together, with her brother walking thêm carefully with his wounds slowing him down. Wounds she caused. However, she didn’t even feel triumphant over that small victory she gained. No one was listening to her cries and screams and insanity. Did anyone even care? It was a long time before she even heard footsteps come her way. bởi that time, she had calmed somewhat, and the skies were darkened, no longer red from the comet. She was breathing heavily but had stopped the tears from coming, and her voice was almost gone from all her yelling. ngọn lửa, chữa cháy puffed from her mouth every other breath, but she simply ignored it.
She pulled her head up to see it wasn’t her brother hoặc even her father. If her father is here, she would have hope; she could be ngọn lửa, chữa cháy Lord again, everything would be what they wanted, and the world would be theirs…
A một giây Chance
Prologue
During the Fall
Here she was, in the middle of falling into insanity, yet it didn’t even feel like it. She felt like she was only venting out her anger and sorrow of her defeat, entangled in chains connected to the ground with no chance to escape on her own. ngọn lửa, chữa cháy exploded from her mouth as she screamed and fell on her side. Yes, this wasn’t insane at all…
Yet the terrified faces of her two worst enemies stood before her, just watching her. Was it so hard to at least get her out of her restraints? She was a ngọn lửa, chữa cháy Lord; she shouldn’t be beaten like this! It wasn’t fair!
Tears splattered from her face as she fell into hysterical crying. The recognition hit. She had lost. She was not ngọn lửa, chữa cháy Lord, nor would she ever be. She had failed-failed her father, failed her nation, failed herself.
Finally, her brother and the Water Tribe girl left together, with her brother walking thêm carefully with his wounds slowing him down. Wounds she caused. However, she didn’t even feel triumphant over that small victory she gained. No one was listening to her cries and screams and insanity. Did anyone even care? It was a long time before she even heard footsteps come her way. bởi that time, she had calmed somewhat, and the skies were darkened, no longer red from the comet. She was breathing heavily but had stopped the tears from coming, and her voice was almost gone from all her yelling. ngọn lửa, chữa cháy puffed from her mouth every other breath, but she simply ignored it.
She pulled her head up to see it wasn’t her brother hoặc even her father. If her father is here, she would have hope; she could be ngọn lửa, chữa cháy Lord again, everything would be what they wanted, and the world would be theirs…
everyone is so pro zuko. and even though he helps aang lots of times and saves many lives. i Mất tích most of my respect wen he Kiss katara. and to tell the truth i was scared they would end up together because katara once told she would end up with a powerfull bender and zuko is pretty powerful.he even tried suducing katara bởi telling her sad stories about his life and getting in the way of a lighting attack from azula to save katara. what a chop... he already has a girl back trang chủ who throws needles at people.
the only thing i feel sorry for zuko is that his fathers a bastard and im sorry his mother disappeared.
its a good thing zuko stop being so angry all the time. he was really pising me off. i never knew what he wanted. so welcome to the light zuko.
even though aang is younge and kitara is obviously thêm mature, im glad they ended up together. like wow.
the only thing i feel sorry for zuko is that his fathers a bastard and im sorry his mother disappeared.
its a good thing zuko stop being so angry all the time. he was really pising me off. i never knew what he wanted. so welcome to the light zuko.
even though aang is younge and kitara is obviously thêm mature, im glad they ended up together. like wow.