Apollo Come And Share Poems Everyone Is Excepted

luluroxs411 posted on Feb 04, 2012 at 02:36AM
i have dedicated a forum to apollo kids (because hes like god of poems and stuff) but mainly dedicated to ya isso
its for anyone and everyone who wants to come and share poems or wants to speak they're mind. if not poems ill try to put up a jornal topic everyday so ppl can put up entries
everyones opion matters


star ligth

oh star light
you are so very bright
you always shine n the sky
even when i eat pie
your beauty is very rare
like a red pare
i hope your always with me
even when i might be lost at sea
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hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
heart
teddy bear

oh teddy bear
oh teddy bear
i love you
do you love me too
every stitch on your body is made of love
just like a lovely dove
so hear me out
dont try to shout
i love you with all my heart
its like cuhit me with a dart
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
crying
sad

i feel sad
sometimes even mad
i dont no why
maybe because of my blind eyes?
its like im lonely
always eating boloney
i got to school
even swim at a community pool
but i dont have someone to talk to
not even when im at the zoo
hơn một năm qua Nico-di-Angelo said…
HAHAHA!!! THANK U LUCY! I LOVE THIS! XD and ur poems r making me laugh so hard that im gonna loose my voice again
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
tongue
hey i wrote them when i was nine ok
geez i told u if it dont rhime then its a crime
vno proooblem
so lets see u put up some master work daughter of apollo
hơn một năm qua lollypop53 said…
tongue
hey guys
oh and surpriszzzzzzz isso
and i told u not to read the damn book luce!!! is it soo hard to do wat ur told
 xin chào guys oh and surpriszzzzzzz isso and i told u not to read the damn book luce!!! is it soo hard
hơn một năm qua Nico-di-Angelo said…
sunny
Who am i with you,
And who am I without you?
Without you I'm lost,
But with you I'm forever at cost.

I don't love you,
But I do,
And that is yet to be true.

Where does this take me?
Who does this make me...?


TA DA! it took me less then 3 minutes to write. An i wasnt even trying. I wrote it in the shower.
STEP ASIDE! APOLLO CHILD COMMIN THROUGH! XD
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
zzz
honestly how do u do tht
even apollo isnt tht good with poems, i mean have u heard him try to make a haku
alright lets see u beat this
make way daughter of poseidon coming

mezmorizing moon
floating in the nights clod breeze
compelling to me......

now tht is a haiku and i wrote it in my sleep
hơn một năm qua Nico-di-Angelo said…
tongue
-.- u did not write that in ur sleep! THAT WAS POSTED A MINUTE AGO AND U JUST ASKED ME HOW TO DO A HAIKU! SO HA! u still had to ask ME how to do one before u wrote it!
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
mischievous
did nott!!!!!!!!!! and i wrote the haaiku for ur information in less then a minute
and i was just making sure it was 5 7 5
yo dad couldnt do half as good!!!!
i will soon teach u show off kids of apollo what true art is
hơn một năm qua Nico-di-Angelo said…
:o wait i minute ill brb im gonna write something!
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
zzz
a minute passed an hour ago isso (yawn)
hơn một năm qua BassRebel said…
Okay...A poem...a poem...a poem...

Cabin 7

All they tell is,
"He died."
You never question,
if they lied.

Till the goat men pull you away,
to a place with people like you,
"Wait till you meet your parent" and you will never guess who.

Once you find out,
Father carries the sun,
you think "Oh how cool!"
but the fun has just begun.

You heal people with your skill,
Expert at archery, oh what a a thrill.
Poems come to you as easy as blinking,
Writing down Golden Sowers without even thinking.

Fitting in this good is pure heaven,
for the kids in Cabin 7.
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hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
smile
Wow that really good dd u just write it
hơn một năm qua BassRebel said…
laugh
Yeah, I came up with it as I went.
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hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
awsome job
this is a story i wrote cause we had to write a story with our vocab words in english
hope u like

The Legend of the Black Witch
Jezebel has many qualities however none of them include punctual, or fine posture. She has smoky violet eyes with flecks of hazel in them and long wavy dark hair. Jezebel never was very good at fitting in, the other kids would always intimidate her and call her a witch. Mainly they were afraid of her eyes. She has her mother's exquisite looks but her eyes are truly one of a kind. Although she has always been very adventurous, she got that part of her from her father. She has many likes and dislikes that others would consider unnatural. She lives in an small abandoned house with a spacious backyard. Every time she enters the first thing she sees, would always be a caricature of her mother and father hanging on the wall. they both died when she was still so young. But she's not always alone because sometimes cats would come by and visit. There is this one specific cat that she calls Zim, he practically lives there and she's actually grateful to have him. For a cat his great company to have around. One day she decides to go further into her forest of a backyard. Zim comes along with her and together they walk and walk and it seemed to go on forever pointlessly. Right when she was about to turn back she saw a minutia opening through the trees. But as she was about to go through something grabbed her and she fell unconscious. She woke up in a little village town. The people looked very cultural and ancient. She tried standing up but they had tied her down. The only bearable part about her situation was that Zim was lying right next to her. But I guess this was the repercussion for trespassing. At that point her faith was questionable because she couldn't tell from their expression just what they were going to do with her. They then picked her up and carried her off to this huge bomb fire. She tried screaming for help and talking them out of it, but nothing worked. When she looked to her sides she realized that Zim was gone and she was absolutely terrified. They were about to throw her in when this men just ran through the crowd and pushed the guys to the ground taking her down with her. the man cut the ropes setting her free. Confused and relieved at what just had happened she got up to her feet. She tried to run away but they stopped her again. She offered to negotiate but they just ignored her. She couldn't understand what they were saying but sounded like the man called her picturesque and opened up some old artifact in front of them. The man looked emotional but you couldn't really tell whether he was crying because he was happy or sad. Just when she thought it was finally over the man turned to her and showed her the picture. It was then that she realized that it wasn't the end but the beginning of a whole new life. At that moment all the village people bowed down to her, but she didn't know whether to be flattered or what. And then the most incredible thing occurred. Zim came back but as he was walking he transformed into a handsome man about her age.

Too be Continued.....
hơn một năm qua BassRebel said…
MY SECOND POEM!

Cake

The sweet smell captures you,
You know there is nothing else you can do.

The ivory frosting piled high,
Toppings and sprinkles touch the sky.

So perfect all you do is stare,
"Why does it have to be fattening? Its so unfair."

Finally you can't resist,
You take a bite of it's elegantness.

The cake is so good its almost a crime,
If it wasn't why would I be trying to rhyme?
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hơn một năm qua Nico-di-Angelo said…
this is the 1st verse. ill do the rest when i have time:

like a lion that roars in the wind.
peaceful, yet thrashing,
it sounds as if it could sing.
a soothing lullaby,
in the middle of the night,
while its waves lap under
the beautiful moon light.

ENJOY! this poem was dedicated to Ace, daughter of Poseidon. this is also part of the hw i did for her -.-
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
BALLONIES!!!!!!!
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
heart
Happy Valentines Day!!!!
hơn một năm qua Nico-di-Angelo said…
HAPPY VALENTINES DAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!! <3
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
crying
we needmore fans
hơn một năm qua Nico-di-Angelo said…
ikr
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
heart
more where those came fro
 thêm where those came fro
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
heart
Love it makes us do crazy things
 tình yêu it makes us do crazy things
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
heart
LOVE does not make the world go round
LOVE is what makes the ride worthwhile
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
heart
you know when your in love when you cant sleep because reality is finally better then your dreams
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
angelic
dont take life for granted
 dont take life for granted
hơn một năm qua Nico-di-Angelo said…
heart
OH MY GOD! THAT! IS! AMAZING!!!!!!

i don't need you to tell me you love me.
i need to KNOW!
to know what love actually is.
to live the way i should live,
with love in my life.
to have my life worth something,
but mostly because you're in it.
i need love to live.
i need love.
i need you...


I WROTE THAT! (about 1-2 minutes)
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
its good but change the last two lines into

I need you
my love
hơn một năm qua Nico-di-Angelo said…
no i like my way better, no offence.
hơn một năm qua PonchikLover said…
heart
It's he who makes my heart forever pound
I love him to the end of this long life
Winter do shake away the humming sound
And let our love be as sharp as the blade of a knife
He is who I shall love with my whole soul
Through the misfortune and pain
He is my fire to the hot burning coal
Through the summer hot and the winter rain
But the eternal love shall never fade
Nor loose the compassion and love of him
Like the summer and the shade that is made
For my love will always be strong not dim
For when we grow and prosper we will see
That forever us two are meant to be
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
Isso sooo helped u that is way to gooood of a poem
hơn một năm qua Nico-di-Angelo said…
hahahaha no its funny cuz i didnt. they have a poetry project and im doing a lot of it but she accualy did that one herself.
hơn một năm qua PonchikLover said…
laugh
Bammmm lucy thats right dnt doubt my smartnesss now :)
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
blah blah blah sorry ppl to lazy to write poem today
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
angry
Ahhhhhhh you ppl need to come on here more!!!!!!!!!
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
One night I dreamed I was walking along the beach with the Lord.
Many scenes from my life flashed across the sky.
In each scene I noticed footprints in the sand.
Sometimes there were two sets of footprints,
other times there were one set of footprints.

This bothered me because I noticed
that during the low periods of my life,
when I was suffering from
anguish, sorrow or defeat,
I could see only one set of footprints.

So I said to the Lord,
"You promised me Lord,
that if I followed you,
you would walk with me always.
But I have noticed that during
the most trying periods of my life
there have only been one
set of footprints in the sand.
Why, when I needed you most,
you have not been there for me?"

The Lord replied,
"The times when you have
seen only one set of footprints,
is when I carried you."
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
The word "angel" actually comes from the Greek word aggelos, which means "messenger." We believe they are protectors, guides and helpers in times of danger.
...Whether they are real or not, they believe in us. Everybody loves their pictures and ornaments, knowing that they symbolize a picture of peace, comfort and warmth inside.
 The word "angel" actually comes from the Greek word aggelos, which means "messenger." We believe they
hơn một năm qua Nico-di-Angelo said…
angelic
Om my goodness Lucy! DID U WRITE THE FOOTPRINT ONE?! I LOOOVE IT! HONESTLY! THATS AMAZING! im gonna post it on the Chrisyianity club XD
hơn một năm qua Nico-di-Angelo said…
hmmm
Lol i wrote this poem for class. It had to make a similie. Anaguration, and a metaphore. I didnt know wat to do so i wrote a COMPLETLY random poem about my friend Leo.

Leo likes leftovers.
His favorite are Burritos.
When he wants a burrito
Nothing can stop him,
Expecialy when he's so hungry
He could eat a horse.
Leorardo is like,
The burrito master.
When he is master,
Burritos shall forever be praized!

Ik, its completly rabdom! Its weird. Its supposed to be weird though, cuz its about leo! XD he likes burritos so ya, u get it. Sry this poem was the WORST i EVER wrote! Lol its random though so thats good.
hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
oh no sorry the author is anonomis (cont say)
gues credit goes to sqiudoo.com ??
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hơn một năm qua Blaze_of_Ares said…
Ares kids we're so cool,
if you wanna fight us your a fool.
Fighting is what we do,
after I'll drink mountain dew.
Threaten us,
you'll die by dusk.
Don't worry I'm not so ruff,
but Clarrise is scary and very harsh.
Apollo kids think they're cool,
but I don't think they can fight a bull.
Make way here I'm an Ares kid,
don't be mean or I'll break your teeth.

What do you think?
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hơn một năm qua Blaze_of_Ares said…
I know it's true,
and so do you.
You know I love you,
and you do to.
Nothing is this world will keep us apart,
even though it's hard.
I know we'll meet,
cause you do to.
My love for you has no due,
and when we meet, kiss you I'll do.
You are my Angel,
I'm your guy.
And when we part,
it'll be by death.
Remember this girl,
never forget.
This might be a secret,
but we know it's real.
I'll meet you for sure,
my dear treasure

This is for my special girl.
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hơn một năm qua luluroxs411 said…
AHHH Blaze honestly both poems are truelly awsome. Thank you for contributing
And where in the gods name did you come up with tht it takes skill dude :)
hơn một năm qua Nico-di-Angelo said…
smile
I like it :D thats awesome. Thats for posting here Blaze :)
hơn một năm qua Blaze_of_Ares said…
Thank you, it's just in me I guess.
hơn một năm qua Blaze_of_Ares said…
I made them as I go, very easy
hơn một năm qua TheGhostKing123 said…
You don`t know that your soul is being ripped out of your chest until it`s to late
You don`t know what could go wrong until is all over
You don`t know you love something so much until it washes away your humanity
And most definitely you don`t know your worth anything until you almost die

-Me