Angel Beats!

Ok, so here are 2 of my sketches. The one with the màu hồng, hồng hair and green eyes is mistymaydawngo 's OC for Angel Beats! : Kiley!
The một giây one is Zack Fair from FINAL fantaisie VII: CRISIS CORE copyright SQUAR ENIX. Tell me what bạn think in the comments.

If bạn want bạn can ask me to draw your OC too but please provide a good mô tả hoặc just some crappy picture to give me a idea. See my other sketch in the bài viết about Katsune Iyo.

Yes, Kiley and Katsune look alike because I used the same model character Tifa Lockhart as their pose thing and so they look similar but I hope its not that vast of a similarity. Oh yeah and heres a fun thing bạn can include in your comment:

Rate each pic (#1-Kiley hoặc #2-Zack) from this scale::
1-Terrible
2- bạn could do better
3- Its a OK pic
4- Its awesome
5- Masterpiece

And be sure to point out anything I can work on. DO NOT WORRY ABOUT MY FEELINGS!!